I can see that you have included the name of your hometown and a place travellers might like to visit (the Sky Tower). Just remember that this activity asks that you describe your hometown using lot of adjectives (describing words).
You have made a start which is good, now you have to add a few more details to your presentation. :) Please go back and edit your slideshow presentation to include more details about your hometown so that I can award you full points for this activity.
Think about all the wonderful things you like about Auckland to help you write your description. You could also start thinking about places visitors could go to that is special to Auckland..
I was born and raised in the big bustling city of Auckland. One of my favourite things to do in Auckland is drive out to Mission Bay Beach and admire the beautiful fountain that has been there for many years. Do you have a favourite place to go to?
Keep working hard Zoe.
Toe feiloa'i fo'i,
Cia.
P.s. Love the colours and fonts in your slideshow! Just a note; your presentation is very long, 55 slides is a lot. Perhaps you can try to cut it down to make it easier to read.
Talofa Zoe,
ReplyDeleteI can see that you have included the name of your hometown and a place travellers might like to visit (the Sky Tower). Just remember that this activity asks that you describe your hometown using lot of adjectives (describing words).
You have made a start which is good, now you have to add a few more details to your presentation. :) Please go back and edit your slideshow presentation to include more details about your hometown so that I can award you full points for this activity.
Think about all the wonderful things you like about Auckland to help you write your description. You could also start thinking about places visitors could go to that is special to Auckland..
I was born and raised in the big bustling city of Auckland. One of my favourite things to do in Auckland is drive out to Mission Bay Beach and admire the beautiful fountain that has been there for many years. Do you have a favourite place to go to?
Keep working hard Zoe.
Toe feiloa'i fo'i,
Cia.
P.s. Love the colours and fonts in your slideshow! Just a note; your presentation is very long, 55 slides is a lot. Perhaps you can try to cut it down to make it easier to read.