Friday 18 May 2018

Writing

17/5/18

Dear Miss Fletcher,

I  think the new bell times are a good idea.

These are the reasons I have for it.

  • Firstly if you eat before playing you might get a stitch and have to go to the sick bay.

  • Secondly if you eat after you can finish your lunch

  • Thirdly I like to  have a longer play time at morning tea

Finally, I would like to add this is a great new play time because we don’t rush our eating.
Yours sincerely, Zoe room 23


4 comments:

  1. Hello my name is Nina.I love your writing and thank you for the comment.
    I hope you have amazing day at school.
    By Nina.

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    1. Thanks for looking at my blog
      Zoe

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  2. hi my name is Mia.

    I really like you writing, it was very interesting ideas. What time would the new bells be. I hope you have an amazing day at school. I go to Pt England school. if you want to have a quick look at my blog here it is https://pesmiat.blogspot.co.nz/.

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    1. I've looked at you're blog its great
      Zoe

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